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Perpetual by gracefulsunshine

I loved the architecture; however, I am no expert of it, and have never been to the Hapsburg palace. The columns and their shading are ...

Daily sketch Challenge Day 10 by Chiis-Katzenjammer

I love your sketch! I have been looking at many different works from other days, and will be adding more to my favorites list, as I am ...

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Yummy Virtual Cookies for Sale!
Chocolatechipcookie by katterley
Fundraiser for Teelia. When teens are raising money for an educational trip, they have a bake sale, so I was thinking...what if I held a "virtual bake sale" and decorated cookies and sold them instead and help Teelia raise funds for her trip?

So here's the idea, tell me how many chips you want, or if you want white chocolate and cranberry, or peanut butter, or oatmeal raisin, even candy coated chocolate candies. When I bake in real life, I'll make "Monster Cookies" and put in coconut shreds, raisins, chocolate chips, flax seeds, apple chunks...I could make you a Monster Cookie, too...


Frosted Cookie for Virtual Bake Sale
CookieLove by katterley
Fundraiser for Teelia . When teens are raising money for an educational trip, they have a bake sale, so I was thinking...what if I held a "virtual bake sale" and decorated cookies and sold them instead and help Teelia raise funds for her trip?

So the commission is this, I will decorate a cookie for you, putting a head shot of your OC onto the cookie!

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Perpetual by gracefulsunshine
I loved the architecture; however, I am no expert of it, and have never been to the Hapsburg palace. The columns and their shading are beautiful, as well as the ethereal way they fade. Rayne and his horse seem to come out of time itself, and the geometric shapes denote that to me even more than conveying motion. Rayne's hair is so distinct; it seems the only tangible, touchable part of either of them, and the texture is done so well.

The narrow muzzle on the horse, as well as the colour, reminds me of an Arabian horse I once "knew" in a southwestern state in America. Quite magnificent.

Seeing the progress was quite enjoyable, too, thank you for sharing!
Thought I'd try a critique for your group. I'm basing my critique on dA's Help page concerning critiques, and do hope your find the critique acceptable.

I enjoyed the opening paragraph and had to continue reading. I rate you high on vision and impact for that reason, as I am easily distracted. To give you 4.5 for technique seems harsh to me, and I wish there was a way to go from 100 to 98 or something similar, but I marked it this way because it is in the opening paragraph that I noticed, "Deny my" instead of "Deny me" or possibly, "Deny my demands and..." and a few other things. I belong to a group that meet at our library that don't allow critiques for proofing errors, we are to critique content only and not proofread, which is more fun, but I thought I'd give input on that count.

Trouble is, I don't know if grammar rules are different for other English speaking countries--we have spelling differences, such as gaol or jail, or colours and colors, defense and defence, etc....so I won't point out spelling or any other technique/proofreading errors for that reason.

Back to content: wondrous! I felt sorry for Jeremy when I realized he was in pain, but upset, too, that he would choose not to enjoy the time he had. That changed to hopeful when he started changing, but, alas, Jeremy was meant to meet his end no matter what his form, it seems.

I wish the transition from Jeremy seeing the light to actually meeting the flames had gone on longer, the magical moth trying to reason with him, even as he tried to reason with himself further. Get to know more of the magical moth's intentions, a reason behind the magic. However, because of my interest, my want to know more, I say the work is that good, because my interest was that captured.

Ah, what a tragic end. The moth may want to consider morphing his next subject during the day, unless it is a magic that only works by lunar power...

Well done.
Hope you have a safe and happy 2016 and the strength to deal with anything that doesn't qualify as safe or happy-making!
My activity involved running around trying to find Internet because ours quit in the middle of Teelia's LiveStream! The McD's wasn't working so we lurked outside someone's house we knew so she could make explanations for disappearing for an hour while I visited with the household of which we lurked...Teelia is an artist very dedicated to her followers, fans, and friends...so we get home and WALA! Internet is again functional. Go figure.
  • Mood: Love
  • Listening to: Sing for Absolution by Muse
  • Reading: False Memory by Dan Krokos--like 15 pages left...
  • Watching: my kid and her awesome art and animations
  • Playing: I got nuthin'
  • Eating: rhubarb dump cake
  • Drinking: water
So I actually *gasp* received my first commission tonight and had to draw it, even though I have to be awake in three hours...yeah, some people never grow up...but...EXCITNG!

and then the Bat Cookie was added to two, yes, two collections. And favorited. Pretty rad. A big thanks to BatdogZ and sweet dreams to anyone on a similar sleep schedule :)

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Cookiekats Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy new year!! :'D
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bear48 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Professional

:wow: Llama jump by Droneguard :headbang: :llama: :headbang: Llama jump by Droneguard :wow:



Bye Emoticon by Weapons-Expert-Cool Thank you for the Llama :llama:



Llama jump by Droneguard :squee: :squee: :wow: :squee: :squee: Llama jump by Droneguard


If a coconut falling from an 80 foot tree is traveling at about 50 MPH when it hits the ground please give me a shorter tree


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Gwasanee Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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You made me smile :heart:
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katterley Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!
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Lucky-Trident Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for that llama ! ;)

I've got a llama over here that is a little blue and could use some love.
I'll send it to you ! That care of its gentle soul. 
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katterley Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you much!
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Lucky-Trident Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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lietzkenick Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the llama! :)
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katterley Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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